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@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ which talks to attend.
People come to FOSDEM from everywhere. I don't think I've ever heard such a
wide selection of languages at the same place. It really brings home just how
-big FOSS is, and how many people care about it.
+massive FOSS is, and how many people care about it.
# Venue
@@ -24,10 +24,11 @@ I certainly will be again.
Also, the beer. Oh my, the beer.
FOSDEM itself is hosted by [Université Libre de Bruxelles
-(ULB)](http://www.ulb.ac.be/). The event takes up a
-[fair chunk](https://fosdem.org/2019/schedule/rooms/) of the campus. This was again quite daunting, but the organisers
-took a lot of effort to make it easy to navigate from place to place with a lot
-of clear signage and timetable information.
+(ULB)](http://www.ulb.ac.be/). The event takes up a [fair
+chunk](https://fosdem.org/2019/schedule/rooms/) of the campus. This was again
+quite daunting, but the organisers took a lot of effort to make it easy to
+navigate from place to place with a lot of clear signage and timetable
+information.
PGDay (see below) was at the Marriott Grand Place, which was pretty much a
regular conference venue as far as the event was concerned. Free running coffee
@@ -38,20 +39,27 @@ and a chair is all I require. I can recommend their steak, though.
There were many stands run by all the FOSS projects we know and love. The
stands were an odd experience compared to a "normal" conference.
-Generally speaking at conferences you have a few big corporations and a bunch
-of smaller companies. Everyone wants to sell you something you've never heard
-of and get your details so they can send you spammarketing information.
+Generally at conferences you have a few big corporations and a bunch of smaller
+companies. Everyone wants to sell you something you've never heard of and get
+your details so they can send you spammarketing information.
Not at FOSDEM. Most of the time I found myself going up to these fantastic
projects like Debian, GitLab or Apache and the conversation was mostly limited
-to "you guys are amazing, thanks for doing what you do".
+to "you guys are amazing, thanks for doing what you do". It was a good chance
+to find out what teams were working on in the FOSS world. In some cases, like
+with Matrix in my case, it was handy to be able to go and chat to them after
+seeing a talk about their project to get some more detail. They also provided
+the opportunity to donate to projects by buying a wide array of merchandise.
# Talks
-I managed to select a good few talks in the end. Sadly, some of them (looking at you,
-[HTTP/3](https://fosdem.org/2019/schedule/event/http3/)) were so popular they weren't possible to get in to. Luckily, all of them are recorded and available to view on [the FOSDEM site](https://fosdem.org/2019/).
+I managed to select a good few talks in the end. Sadly, some of them (looking
+at you, [HTTP/3](https://fosdem.org/2019/schedule/event/http3/)) were so
+popular they weren't possible to get in to. Luckily, all of them are recorded
+and available to view on [the FOSDEM site](https://fosdem.org/2019/).
-Here's a sample of those I attended.
+Here's a sample of those I attended. I recommend you follow the links and check
+out the videos yourself if you find them interesting.
## [Java 4..12, Kotlin, Code Coverage and their best friend — bytecode: scandals, intrigues, investigations](https://fosdem.org/2019/schedule/event/kotlin_code_coverage_bytecode/) --- Evgeny Mandrikov
@@ -71,8 +79,8 @@ My colleague Magnus presented what's new and magical in PostgreSQL 11.
## Netflix
-This was a slightly disappointing talk. He focussed a lot on the advantages of working
-closely with upstream FreeBSD and of publishing their improvements. That's all very
+This was a slightly disappointing talk. IT focussed a lot on the advantages of working
+closely with upstream FreeBSD and of publishing their improvements. That's very
true, but it's an odd pitch to a room full of people at an open source conference.
There were some interesting details about the hardware Netflix use in their CDN
@@ -83,7 +91,7 @@ caches and the areas they have to focus on for performance.
## [2019 - Fifty years of Unix and Linux advances](https://fosdem.org/2019/schedule/event/keynote_fifty_years_unix/) --- Jon 'maddog' Hall
It was great to have an opportunity to see maddog talk. He was engaging and
-enthusiastic as he talked about his experiences living through the turbulent
+enthusiastic as he talked about his experiences living through the entire
history of Unix and Linux. He ran out of time in the end, but luckily a riot
was prevented when he was allowed to finish.
@@ -104,6 +112,6 @@ Also I got a fluffy Slonik.
I'd like to thank the fantastic people who take the time and effort to organise
this event. Having been marginally involved in running conventions, I've seen
-how hard it can be to wrangle these things. And this event is *ridiculously huge*
-(the statistics in the closing talk had us eating 200kg of waffles *alone*).
-The effort involved must be herculean. So, yeah, thanks!
+how hard it can be to wrangle these things. And this event is *ridiculously
+huge* --- the statistics in the closing talk had us eating 200kg of waffles
+*alone*! The effort involved must be herculean. So, yeah, thanks!